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Sorry, everyone

  • Apr. 4th, 2009 at 5:55 PM
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Everyone reading this blog / directed from FF.net who reads BotE...
 

I know I haven't been updating much lately, and it's because I'm putting Breath on the Embers on hiatus for a little while.

Honest reason? Firstly, Because I know I can do better. I began it a year ago, and I've done a lot of writing since then. I've gotten better, and I want to go back and touch up what I've done, bring it up to standard.

Secondly, what's in my head now bears almost no resemblance to the story that I was planning then, so I need to go back and work in all the extra stuff. Make the thing run as a whole.

Thirdly, because I've gotten stuff wrong. Some of my characterisations are way out. I'm also factually wonky, as for some reason I can't remember, I've got Youko's anniversary of taking the throne in summer, instead of winter. Canonically, she finished kicking Joyei's ass in summer and didn't formally take the throne until a few months later. This is just one sore point. There are many others.

Fourthly, because...this is a really great series I'm writing fanfic for. It's not often you find something you love as much as 12K. I want to do it justice. After all, the people who read it feel the same way about this thing as I do. And that means it's going to be slow, because it's a complex world and the characters all feel like real people, who need respect.

But bear with me, and it'll be much meatier, and better written, and more interesting, and it'll be a better read.

One thing I have to point out now - it's not going to be a romance. The relationships are just subplots. There is some YoukoxKeiki in it because I'm a high-pitched fangirl that way, but it's part of the background.

It's supposed to be a political adventure story. A hard-hitting epic about life, responsibility and the inevitability of loneliness... With sparkly unicorns!

OK, but seriously, I'm trying to defluff it a little. Although I'm a bit of a comedienne at heart so it's not going to be dry and depressing. Never fear. :D

Thanks for all the support,

-Indy

 


 

Comments

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[info]artimusdin wrote:
Apr. 5th, 2009 12:15 am (UTC)
<3 You do what you have to. I'll wait impatiently with bated breath for the updated version.
[info]italicsinindigo wrote:
Apr. 6th, 2009 07:12 pm (UTC)
*sniff*

T-there's something in my eye...
[info]artimusdin wrote:
Apr. 6th, 2009 07:15 pm (UTC)
*gives tissue over* =) What can I say? I like the unipornscorns and their husbands. In the mean time, I can continue wrestling with this Gyousou pic. He's such a stubborn man, geez.
[info]italicsinindigo wrote:
Apr. 6th, 2009 07:49 pm (UTC)
Ah, yes, good luck with that! I eagerly await your own artistic endeavours. Naked Gyousou endeavours. Honourable toil.

*points at Keiki* I FEEL YOUR PAIN.
[info]artimusdin wrote:
Apr. 6th, 2009 07:54 pm (UTC)
I rather think so. Taiki, on the other hand, can't stop blushing.

Heee, I'm sure you do. Youko will eventually get her waifu to loosen up I'm sure. Eventually. *nods wisely*
[info]aragon_asten wrote:
Apr. 6th, 2009 06:03 am (UTC)
*sigh* no Youko Keiki.
[info]italicsinindigo wrote:
Apr. 6th, 2009 07:11 pm (UTC)
Now hang on just a minute. I never said there'd be NO YoukoKeiki. I love that emotionally repressed pony too much to let him get off that lightly. ;)
[info]gun_smoke_blue wrote:
Apr. 8th, 2009 09:36 pm (UTC)
Heya!

Name's Ash, got directed over here from your ff.net account. The 12K has been a great love of mine ever since I found the novels in an out-of-the way corner of Barnes and Noble two years ago, and I'm happy to see a fine writer such as yourself writing fic for it. Breath on Embers has made me smirk, outright laugh, and go "awww", all in the same page. May I friend you to receive updates on the story? Much appreciated, luv. ;P
[info]italicsinindigo wrote:
Apr. 11th, 2009 01:05 pm (UTC)
Hi Ash! I'm Indy.

Ditto! I also found the first book in the back of B&N, which is quite fortuitous as I don't live in the USA. XD The cover gave my retinas such an assault I had to pick it up, even though I was running out of money and room in my suitcase. Needless to say, so glad I did.

Aww, shucks. I've gone all pink now.

I see you've already friended me regardless. You rebel.

Thanks for getting in touch!
[info]kocimietka wrote:
May. 18th, 2009 03:44 pm (UTC)
please just dont forget about that fanfic....
there is a lot of ppl that wait for it^^
keep up good work and thank you ;D
[info]italicsinindigo wrote:
May. 18th, 2009 03:54 pm (UTC)
Hey, don't worry! It's because I know that lots of people read it that I'm tryng to make it as good as possible. :D It's always at the back of my mind somewhere.

Thank you! ^_^
[info]kocimietka wrote:
May. 18th, 2009 04:03 pm (UTC)
;D
thats great to hear^^
its just I found that fanfic and its really good ;) and Im so damn curious about what happen next, who were the arsonists etc....as it is I find myself cheacking it everyday ;P
maybe I should get cheacked...;P
your writing is infecting other ppl ;PPP
thx once again ^^
[info]italicsinindigo wrote:
May. 18th, 2009 04:49 pm (UTC)
Re: ;D
The arsonists? Fu fu fu... XD Just you wait.
I'll friend you so when I update, it'll pop up in your flist. That'll save you some time!
[info]kocimietka wrote:
May. 18th, 2009 06:15 pm (UTC)
Re: ;D
thx very much^^
....by the way....are arsonist some kinda revolutionary group from Kou?....nevermind I will wait (I didnt hit a 'barn' with that gues probably^^)

PS - Im curious - how old are you? ;D
[info]italicsinindigo wrote:
May. 19th, 2009 10:36 am (UTC)
Re: ;D
Fu fu fu.

Wait and see! I have to warn you, I like putting twists in so there's to be liberal amounts of intruige in there. We will be seeing a lot of Kou, as Youko's instincts are leading her there. :D

I'm eighteen. You?

[info]kocimietka wrote:
May. 19th, 2009 11:02 am (UTC)
Re: ;D
That's what I like^^
Plus you seem to be able to put up everything so it works smoothly ;) and doesn't seem out of character - and you are stil 18? I'm impresed - I was and still am kinda dunderhead ;PPPP

I'm 24 ;P
[info]italicsinindigo wrote:
May. 19th, 2009 11:35 am (UTC)
Re: ;D
Thanks for the faith you have in me! I tend to obsess about my writing so it gets complicated... But it's good to hear that it seems to be working. :)

Oh, I have my dunderheaded moments!
[info]kocimietka wrote:
May. 19th, 2009 12:06 pm (UTC)
Re: ;D
always ;D
- I came to like your work^^
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