Everyone reading this blog / directed from FF.net who reads BotE...
I know I haven't been updating much lately, and it's because I'm putting Breath on the Embers on hiatus for a little while.
Honest reason? Firstly, Because I know I can do better. I began it a year ago, and I've done a lot of writing since then. I've gotten better, and I want to go back and touch up what I've done, bring it up to standard.
Secondly, what's in my head now bears almost no resemblance to the story that I was planning then, so I need to go back and work in all the extra stuff. Make the thing run as a whole.
Thirdly, because I've gotten stuff wrong. Some of my characterisations are way out. I'm also factually wonky, as for some reason I can't remember, I've got Youko's anniversary of taking the throne in summer, instead of winter. Canonically, she finished kicking Joyei's ass in summer and didn't formally take the throne until a few months later. This is just one sore point. There are many others.
Fourthly, because...this is a really great series I'm writing fanfic for. It's not often you find something you love as much as 12K. I want to do it justice. After all, the people who read it feel the same way about this thing as I do. And that means it's going to be slow, because it's a complex world and the characters all feel like real people, who need respect.
But bear with me, and it'll be much meatier, and better written, and more interesting, and it'll be a better read.
One thing I have to point out now - it's not going to be a romance. The relationships are just subplots. There is some YoukoxKeiki in it because I'm a high-pitched fangirl that way, but it's part of the background.
It's supposed to be a political adventure story. A hard-hitting epic about life, responsibility and the inevitability of loneliness... With sparkly unicorns!
OK, but seriously, I'm trying to defluff it a little. Although I'm a bit of a comedienne at heart so it's not going to be dry and depressing. Never fear. :D
Thanks for all the support,
-Indy
- Mood:determined


Comments
impatiently with bated breath for the updated version.T-there's something in my eye...
pornscorns and their husbands. In the mean time, I can continue wrestling with this Gyousou pic. He's such a stubborn man, geez.*points at Keiki* I FEEL YOUR PAIN.
Heee, I'm sure you do. Youko will eventually get her waifu to loosen up I'm sure. Eventually. *nods wisely*
Name's Ash, got directed over here from your ff.net account. The 12K has been a great love of mine ever since I found the novels in an out-of-the way corner of Barnes and Noble two years ago, and I'm happy to see a fine writer such as yourself writing fic for it. Breath on Embers has made me smirk, outright laugh, and go "awww", all in the same page. May I friend you to receive updates on the story? Much appreciated, luv. ;P
Ditto! I also found the first book in the back of B&N, which is quite fortuitous as I don't live in the USA. XD The cover gave my retinas such an assault I had to pick it up, even though I was running out of money and room in my suitcase. Needless to say, so glad I did.
Aww, shucks. I've gone all pink now.
I see you've already friended me regardless. You rebel.
Thanks for getting in touch!
there is a lot of ppl that wait for it^^
keep up good work and thank you ;D
Thank you! ^_^
its just I found that fanfic and its really good ;) and Im so damn curious about what happen next, who were the arsonists etc....as it is I find myself cheacking it everyday ;P
maybe I should get cheacked...;P
your writing is infecting other ppl ;PPP
thx once again ^^
I'll friend you so when I update, it'll pop up in your flist. That'll save you some time!
....by the way....are arsonist some kinda revolutionary group from Kou?....nevermind I will wait (I didnt hit a 'barn' with that gues probably^^)
PS - Im curious - how old are you? ;D
Wait and see! I have to warn you, I like putting twists in so there's to be liberal amounts of intruige in there. We will be seeing a lot of Kou, as Youko's instincts are leading her there. :D
I'm eighteen. You?
Plus you seem to be able to put up everything so it works smoothly ;) and doesn't seem out of character - and you are stil 18? I'm impresed - I was and still am kinda dunderhead ;PPPP
I'm 24 ;P
Oh, I have my dunderheaded moments!
- I came to like your work^^